Name: Chaotic Tranquility
Location: USA
Title:“Shattered”
Size: 20″ x 40″
Medium: Acrylic Inks
From Chaotic Tranquility:
The coffin’s not nailed
Thoughts unveiled
From the shadows I’ve stepped
No longer inept
Feet at the path
Vision is crystal
Off like a shot
Bullet from a pistol
Gotta go straight
Gotta be true
Gonna do the things
I was born to do.
8 responses so far ↓
1 The Host // Oct 17, 2009 at 11:38 pm
Hi Chaotic Tranquility,
Really beautiful abstract and I love your poem!
Welcome to your first Challenge! And you know, this group is going to poke at you until they unveil your identity. I’d be prepared for that if I were you. LOL
Vikki
2 Rusty Harden // Oct 18, 2009 at 9:14 am
I see so much scenery beyond the edges. I really like the balance between the warm and cool colors. There is a lot to look at here.
3 WILLIAM MALTESE // Oct 18, 2009 at 11:01 am
Shattered, indeed. But in its shattering having become something truly marvelous.
4 Candle Artist Jfay // Oct 18, 2009 at 2:53 pm
Tis truly a beauty ~ Welcome Chaotic Tranquility! Love your art and poetry.
5 Chaotic Tranquility // Oct 18, 2009 at 7:14 pm
Oh my gracious ! Thank you all so much for your kindly words and warm hospitality; you have no idea how much it means coming from such accomplished artists such as yourselves ! As I’ve told Ms. North I am neither artist nor writer by any means .. just an admiring interloper to your fantastical site. Thank you for letting me participate.
6 beckielboo // Oct 19, 2009 at 12:44 am
Hi Interloper (one of my favorite words) – consider yourself more than a paticipator – you are an artist and poet!
I see Kokopelli and several ravens! And the last verse of your poem is wonderful!
Welcome!
7 Chaotic Tranquility // Oct 19, 2009 at 7:37 pm
Lol .. that’s very sweet of you Ms. Beckielboo .. I guess a person can dream hehe !
I had to look up Kokopelli; he’s a native american fertility deity as well as being a trickster and spirit of music. I didn’t realize all that was in there lol. I love to hear what others find in it. Thank you for sharing with me.
8 sonya meglaurel // Oct 27, 2009 at 6:14 am
love the last para of this sonnet! The work reminds me of broken glass
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