Name: Chaotic Tranquility
Location: USA
Title:“Thief ”
Size: 5″ x 7″
Medium: Collage
From Chaotic Tranquility:
I see
I look
I know
What you took
Violation
Desecration
Emotion Vampire
Bleedin me to the wire
Bared my soul
You took your toll
Inside
Something died
Emotions calcified
Gettin offa this ride
Cause I cried
When you lied
I want it back
The thing I lack
What you stole
…the little portion
of my soul…
8 responses so far ↓
1 vikki // Nov 14, 2009 at 8:55 pm
Hi Chaotic,
Wonderful piece and.. and sadly I have to admit I have a couple people like that in my life also. And I’d like to get back what they took.
2 Rusty // Nov 14, 2009 at 10:00 pm
You achieved portraying the thief’s power in your collage. Even without the poem we would know it hasn’t been returned (that chain does it). I’m disturbed and want to get it and return it to you. You convey strong emotions.
3 Mary Mary // Nov 16, 2009 at 8:25 pm
Wow Chaotic….so much said in your words and in the figure. A great piece of work. Well done.
4 Sonya Meglaurel // Nov 18, 2009 at 9:14 am
Here, here…take it back. Your presence and demeanor makes one wonder who would have dared!
5 Chaotic Tranquility // Nov 23, 2009 at 7:26 pm
Hi Vikki
Thank you for your kind words. As I mentioned to you I think just about everyone has had persons / circumstances that have taken what can’t always be re-acquired; perhaps even years of our life. I’m sorry this is so for you too my dear. Sometimes identifying and purging their influence can be one of the hardest but most rejuvenating experiences.
6 Chaotic Tranquility // Nov 23, 2009 at 7:29 pm
Hi Rusty
You have such a keen eye; you don’t seem to miss much of anything ! Bless your sweet heart for wanting to help me so; but I think all of us have little missing pieces .. chipped but not broken, right ?
7 Chaotic Tranquility // Nov 23, 2009 at 7:31 pm
Hello Mary Mary
. So I cherish each and every comment on here .. thanks again !
Thank you so much for your compliments, I truly appreciate them..previously I’d only shared with a very few close friends and didn’t realize how hard it would be to open up like this even though I’m anonymous lol. I’m kinda silly like that hehe
8 Chaotic Tranquility // Nov 23, 2009 at 7:31 pm
Lol Sonya Meglaurel !
Thank you for your comment.
If only my tongue were as brave as my pen hehe
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